What would I do without you?

Just last night

I appreciated with all of my might

What would happen if you left this world before me

Nay, I say, No!

I see no purpose for living, no reason for 

Spring to bloom

Summer to enjoy

Autumn to tuck in cosily

I see only Winter

The sharp, howling winds

The frostbites surround me with 

A marvellous vengeance

Mocking my earlier arrogance

The Earth dances with the Sun

Alas, the Moon!

Cheeky thing she is, 

She steals the show sometimes

The clock ticks away

Tick-tock

A second down

Tock-tick

Two seconds down

Is time on my side

The clock indeed has 

Two Cupid arrows

Don't be stupid

Tick-tock

My heart skips a beat

Tick-tock

Another beat is skipped 

I see you

Feel you

Smell your intoxicating scent

Another beat

A toast!

To my dark-haired damsel

Pour that disgusting concoction

Till we can't find our mouths no more

I am back in this damned darkness

Memories a gathering light

Normal people have no idea how beautiful the dark is

With you

It is getting dark, my love...

Very dark...

Very...

...

..

.

Reviews

[Sumit Datta]

There is contrasts and imagery.... the poet chooses dark for a reason ....."The clock indeed has
Two Cupid arrows
Don't be stupid
Tick-tock".....is a very good expression.

[B]

I am kind of going through something like this right now
i am going into deep darkness
all it took is not seeing someone i once saw for seconds every morning
but he made me happy
without him i am withering and dying like a rose
all my petals fell
i am dying
my hair is falling
for real
i feel a big hole inside

[B]

Ok i am scared
lol
the dark part
it is scary
but amazing all together

[the writer of woe]

Very beautiful. I especially loved the nice imagery of winter. Winter is always the loveliest season as it portrays cold hearts.

[child of God]

This is beautiful I liked it i loved the flow a pleasure to read thank you for sharing
Broken girl

[Lizardo]

I felt my heart beat growing quick when I read this
What an interesting piece of work you have here
"Normal people have no idea how beautiful the dark is
With you"
Amazing piece of writing

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Even the thought of losing someone precious...oh, dear, God is unfathomable. And the reason for existing is no more, because don't we all live for someone special? Don't we all hold on for someone dear?

I like how you described the loss of reason feeling like Winter and other seasons no longer are felt, no longer do exist.

And the last stanza is just haunting me:
"Memories a gathering light
Normal people have no idea how beautiful the dark is
With you
It is getting dark, my love...
Very dark...
Very...
...
..
."

[armin]

The fears and tears of losing our loved ones, it feels very bad when someone special has to separate.
Then it feels like a wall of rigid bricks standing in middle of distances ,stopping us making harder to meet that lovable person.

Spidey. ...

[GreenEyedPoet]

You described how it feels to lose someone perfectly! It was a great read. :)

[Daniel Whitaker]

Very powerful. I enjoyed reading it.