Phone off the hook

Sending chills up your spine

Phone off 

the hook

still ringing

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

A very intriguing piece of writing. Great job. Powerful. Compelling.

[Roland Petrov]

Your story is off the hook! (Somebody had to say it.) Six words for a story is ridiculous, but you've made it happen. The imagination can go wild with this.

[Leviathus Fortes]

Different scenes of horror flashed through my mind after reading this.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

that was totally sinister! brr!

[luvs2write]

I love six word stories! Especially the ones that leave the reader spooked out and guessing. Great work with this one. Keep writing!! =)

[Deepika]

Lol..the only way i could pacify my mind was by convincing it that i had another phone in my pocket that was actually ringing :P

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Concise and clever write! Good job TKS!

[Roshan Nair]

lol In my head you just painted a scene out of ring3 I think. So unthinkable and scary is the phenomenon of anything pedestrian malfunctioning is to us, its almost ridiculous :P great work :)

[Tks]

Exactly! Roshan, you have a very clear idea of how poems are weaved...I think it might be due to your valuable music background:) As Shakespeare's Gratiano in The Merchant of Venice once said " A man without music in his ears is fit only for treason and murder" hahaha!

[Lavender Soya]

Simply clever! The best thing about stories with hanging plots is you can think of anything that should happen next. Kudos! :-)

[Tks]

Thank you for kindly dropping by, Lavender:) always a pleasure to see your insightful, thought-provoking reviews:) Still can't get the "Devil's wine" out of my head from your writing piece!

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome Tks. :-) hahaha that devil's wine is quite remarkable per se. Anyway, glad you liked it. See you around!

[Lav]

This is a chilling piece of writing to read, I had goosebumps running all over me!