A new day

I wrote this song when I was little lol Please do correct my grammar if needed

Chorus: A new day is risen that heaven has pour .
Which will run on till the end.
This new day is forever a cleansing flow,
It falls as love from above.

1. Some people mourn,
Some people cry,
There is a time for everything.
These are the reasons,
Some believe that tomorrow will bring smile on their faces.
This is a hope and it will come true,
If they hold on it ,
Coz it's a new day .

2. Yesterday is gone , I see no light back there.
But now comes a finest thing I ever seen, a miracle in my darkest path.
I will cry no more for such worst I made,
Coz you gave me a reason to see a new beginning,
a new day to live on and on.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There are miracles that draw or drag one back into the comfortblae place. Seems your gently laid phrases are saying that with glorious and thankful praise. To endure a prolonged pause then be stimpulated byt the Magic of True Discovery is so very precious. Your way of writing is YOUR voice, don't rush too soon to alter it. Read good Enlish books and let their phrasing and word usage inspire you, perhaps?! Thank you for letting me/us read.