The story of my Mother

When my mother first saw him,
She ran quick to a place where she can say a little prayer.
She said, ' thank God I knew you'd sent him.
I knew exactly you would blessed what I have prayed for.
From my first cry,
You knew what I will need.
I waited for your best,
You gave me more than that .'
And she thank him with tears in her eyes.

It was late in 80s,
They got married and had babies of their own.
It was something more than he asked for,
So he knelt down holding her hand.
He said , ' Thank God for the love of my life.
And the two lives she gave ,
Is all because the strength you gave her.
I knew you heard my prayers,
And She's the answers all .
It's your love from above,
I can hold her hands right now.'
He thank Him with tears in his eyes.

Never knew life could be that short.
She buried him 6 feet under,
In the fiery woods.
It killed her a little,
The fact they only spent 5 years together.
She broke down in tears,
When she realized another live she was carrying.
She died everyday,
Worried for the bread .
She was young ,
She was weak.

She stood on her foot,
Held her little ones hands.
And said ,' Thank God I knew you sent him for a reason.
And that reason gave me these three .
My world felt apart,
but you made it whole again.
From my first cry,
You knew these little ones .
You knew they'll need me,
So you wrote me into their lives.
The mission ,
That every mother has on earth,
I will fulfill .
Thank you for making me part of these amazing kids,
I called them mine.
She is a hero

Reviews

[Agyani]

I liked this piece. There are a few grammatical errors, but I could still feel what you were trying to show, and that's the most important thing. :)

I wouldn't want you to change the structure of the tale. Just do a bit of grammatical editing and it should be fine. More than fine, I think! If you want you could use Grammarly. It can help you understand your errors and learn.

Again, I liked this bittersweet story. :)

[Toto James]

Hey thank you so much. I really appreciate ya corrections , I really needed one

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky)when your mama saw you she ran for the hills you ugly skank. Now you livin in an orfenag writing this stupid garbage

[Toto James]

Hahahaha yeah kinda of, I was raised by single parent.
Thanks for the review though