Internal Darkness

Shifting into internal darkness,

how does it feel to die?

I don't see heaven or hell,

I don't see a glowing light.

 

I feel my skin burning

As the water soaks into my skin,

I taste the rich, cool air,

and my soul pierces the veil which now seems so thin.

 

My life flashes infront of me,

and I remember those who I once loved,

Why did they betray me?

If they loved me, right now I would be safe not heading above.

 

I embrace internal darkness,

and wish for a glowing light,

Now I don't have to wonder,

what it's like to die.

 

Author's Note

So, any thoughts? I take critisim well(:

Reviews

[UnknownWritter]

where it says I feel my skin burning As the water soaks into my skin you should change As the water soaks into my skin to as the water soaks in

[Jason Shadows]

That Which Is Unseen Can Be Seen By Those Who Do Not Believe. Dark And Movable In The Mind From The Darkness. Haunting And Following Us In The Light.

I Like This One.