Good Bye

Move On Its New Begning

Celebrate Good Bye
Recreat And Liberate
Your Mind.
Now The Time
Is Right.
Break The Habit.
Try To Unite It.
Come On,
And Celebrate
Welcome Back To Life..!!

Author's Note

Thanks For Your precious view (:

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!
:)

[Reetta]

This is a very well thought out poem, but if you don't mind I'd suggest a different organization of the poem.
Celebrate Good Bye,
Recreate And Liberate Your Mind.
Now The Time Is Right.
Break The Habit,
Try To Unite.
Come On,
And Celebrate
Welcome Back To Life..!!

It just makes it easier to read and the rhyming works better that way
A very nice poem however

[Bibliophile-Tipsy]

Your suggestions are too important, thanks for nice Suggestion and for your kind review (:

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're right Moving On is a New Beginning. Nice Poem!

[Bibliophile-Tipsy]

Thanks dear (: