In Your Brown Eyes

In your brown eyes I fell.

Drowing.

No noise came though as your water filled my lungs.

Breathing impossible.

Thoughts gone.

The world spins and dips,

Up going down, down going up,

And I,

Stuck somewhere in the middle.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful description of looking into someone eyes and falling apart. These are the good moments in a life. Good description create a hopeful vision. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote