Enough

Not again

In front of them

I've done enough

More than I should

So I cover the stuff

As best as I could

The pain

The fear

The terror

The tears

Not again

Not in front of them

Is it weak

To be strong

Or is what I seek

Completely wrong

Reviews

[yellow devil]

Nothing sought is ever completely wrong, most of the time it is just misunderstood. The setup you use to convey your message makes me feel the constant back and forth between wanting someone to see the trials one goes through and the fear of them seeing it at the same time.

[Aislinn]

Thank you.

[Yang-Bi Li]

I like the rhyming and flow of the poem :) It's pretty good.
And though it was repetitive, it fit quite well in this case...

Good read; thanks ^^

[Aislinn]

I tend to be a bit repetitive at times. I know. But thank you.

[Yang-Bi Li]

Me too; I feel ya. Sure thing; thanks for the read ^^