Somebody

I'm just a nobody
not someone most know
Someone who's not a somebody
A loser, you know

The ones that you see
in the corner of the room
and along the vine
there's bad talk of us too

but you're a somebody
everyone knows about you
the friends you have
and everyone always noticed you.

So along you spread
rumors untrue
about nobodies
like me, not you

so I ask you once
and hold out my hand
once and for all
we should take a stand

but you couldn't do it
with your rep on the line
so i wave my hand
and say goodbye

I finally gave up
and fell staight down
into an abyss
with no one around

but no one would miss me
and that was true
cause no one could miss a nobody
especially a somebody, like you.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading :) I hope you like it.

Reviews

[MWilliam]

I did like it. It is well written and expresses how we all feel from time to time in life. It is so easy to feel like a nobody in this world. It also makes me sad that we treat one another like this. I do hope you are somebody's somebody too.

[WordlessFacade]

Thank you, and I hope you are somebody's somebody as well.

[maxie-thena]

It makes me sad. i feel like this sometimes and i'd rather not, if i can change it.
Its a really nice and deep poem

[WordlessFacade]

Thank you, and I know what you mean.

[Aethereal]

It's much better to be a nobody, a void, because everything falls into a void. A black hole consumes everything, everybody, every somebody. A black space also sees everything, every speck of light no matter how faint. A nobody also is fearless since it has noting to lose, nothing to hold on to. Nothingness is Tranquility and infinite perception. The gods are cursed with immortality, and they lack the power to do anything about it; they envy our mortality, our possession of the power of Nothingness.

[WordlessFacade]

Wow, I never thought of it that way.

[Aethereal]

There are two or more sides to everything. Points-of-view are symetrical, left and right.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Oh, this is so good. I know exactly where this comes from. It's kind of like feeling all alone in a room full of people. Like an outcast, "...just a nobody...a loser..." Very nice work.

[WordlessFacade]

Thank you so much! :D

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, this piece is so creative, I loved it. Great write.

Kaze~ :-)

[WordlessFacade]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. ^-^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)