Re-Making Her

For The Creative Poetry Group.

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She is beautiful
But she is not alive
A beauty undead
With too many wounds
Where pain on her has fed

She is lovely
But she is not alive
So she sat down and prayed
Please put me back together
Let me be re-made

She is gorgeous
But she is not alive
Patched up with needle and thread
Now happy she always smiles
Not alive but better than dead

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Excellent poem matching the picture. Different and unique idea.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was a unique write that was done very creatively! Great read!

[KAREN]

This was fun to read! Love the use of the painting. Love the flow, and the ending brought it altogether.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like how you used this painting to create a beautiful thought. I like the last stanza the most.

[Star Wolf]

This is extraordinary. You did an awesome job writing a poem to go with this picture.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is a really cool poem to go with the picture. Outstanding and creative work here!