Waiting

Senryu.

cars on the highway
just beyond are endless trees
I'm still waiting here

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Very nice senryu. We did take a while in the store but when we came back, treats!

[Star Wolf]

I know the wait was worth it and then we just went zipping along to Mt. Hood with our goodies!

[Robin]

causes of pauses

[Black Cat Fever]

I like the picture. Very beautiful. I also like the senyru. I too, hope you weren't kept waiting too long there!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like this. I hope you weren't left waiting too long!

[An owl on the moon]

In these three lines you express a movement in life, a vastness surrounding you, and that place of rest.. waiting for life to dance on. Amazing scene!

[Poetic Beauty]

This has a bit of mystery to it. It makes me wonder who is waiting and why.

[Calypso]

That sucks when that happens. Once I read that we spend 2 weeks of your live total waiting at stop lights. Crazy.
I love your Senryus. They are always expressive and beautiful.

[Marie Harrison]

It's a nice beautiful day there.
Loved your senyru.

[Brenden Taylor]

Love a good senryu, but hate it that you're left behind - a feeling I'm all too familiar with.