Barn Swallows

lune haiku - 5/3/5 word count.

purple barn swallow
sweeping across a golden field
distant cows grazing

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

How lovely of an image! Having lived in the country where golden fields were blessings, and cows grazing were seen gracing the pasture lands, your words certainly brings back memories of beautiful days filled with visions of barn swallows, and many other wonderful sights!
Nicely done!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The nature of serenity. Such peaceful imagery.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very tranquil and peaceful scene. Very nice.

[Sam Severn]

Simply DIVINE! ㋡

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This has a real pastoral feel to it, very peaceful. I like it!

[Calypso]

This makes me think of the country, of nature. Yet I can't help but feel there's a touch of darkness in this.
Great job.

[Star Wolf]

This one has the feel of being out in the country side on a hot afternoon. I really like this too!

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...nature on a summer's lazy afternoon
peaceful poem.