Blue Patterns

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count

rain drops blue
summer breeze creating warm ripples
reflecting afternoon sunlight

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Took me to a good warm day by the water. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I feel like I'm sitting beside an outdoor swimming pool! I like the strong visual in this piece.

[Calypso]

This reminds me of this summer. I remember waking up and planning to go out but it was raining.
I love your haikus, they always make me think of the past.

[Star Wolf]

Very beautiful image here. Nothing like relaxing beside some cool water with a cool breeze drifting about all afternoon long.

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...makes me want to go swimming.
I love those ripples to wash over me.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful little gem!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

a refection of summer days, beautiful.

[KAREN]

A beautiful picture you painted here.