White Frosted Forest

Written for the Creative Poetry Group. Words used: bewitching, enthralling, inventive, silver, hellion, epic.

A forest of white frosted trees before me
In an enthralling and enchanting night
Dare I enter this silver forest?
There's something there waiting within
Something dark that I can't see
Then I hear a whispery voice
Seductive and oh so bewitching
I know I should turn around and leave
Instead I enter this forest of white frosted trees
And there she stood waiting for me
Her eyes a blue so radiant and sharp
Her smile so charming and hiding dark secrets
She was created by someone very inventive I knew
Then she flipped her long red hair over her shoulder
She laughed, a coy and playful sound
I watched as she turned and slipped away
I could only helplessly follow this wild hellion
I knew this was the beginning of an epic adventure

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This would make for a great longer story. The details of the frosted white forest and the woman with red hair are amazing.

[Black Cat Fever]

This gave me a bit of a chill, had my hair standing on end for several minutes. Great job on capturing the dread and fear in this. I sure hope the adventure is a good one!

[Sam Severn]

I love the dark feel to this, n' the sense of danger n' adventure you capture!

[Morning Star]

Wow i love it I love mother nature your words capture
stunning images and i felt a mysterious mystical feeling
As i read this amazing poem
Brilliant Job

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Even beauty has a dark side to it.. now I want to know what happened.

[Star Wolf]

This is beautiful and sinister at the same time. Great job in using the words to create this poem.

[Norma M Sutton]

Very nice, especially for one that had to include all those words.