Winter Wild

Haiku

across the white snow
an echo of a wolf cry
 ivory flakes fall

  

 

Reviews

[Christopher James]

A beautiful, serene and a little haunting Haiku. The form is more often than not difficult to pack meaning and depth within the short word count. Every word counts. And you use every word with incredible dexterity and flare of inventiveness. I love short poems like this for that reason. There's an amazing sense of longevity and time passing, whilst giving way to nature and the influence of colour and sound only adds to the picture the poem paints. Stunning work :)

[r]

That's beautiful. The picture it paints is vivid and quiet. I love it, especially since it has wolves in it.

[Rossen]

You have painted an image that has the power to stand alone
and does justice to the one you have...

[Ladysue]

A beautiful scene you painted in this short gem...nicely done...

[Star Wolf]

Awesome and beautiful. I love wolves and this is, yes, AWESOME!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Your words paint a very vivid and beautiful picture, even without the lovely pic you added to your work. I give this 100.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful scene of the wild and wolves. Love it.

[Robin]

nice ~

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Your words made your poem come alive. I have Ojibwa Land in the Upper Michigan. The wolf still own the land. It is a good when they sing to the night moon. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such vidid imagery, I could hear the wolves echo as the snow fell! wonderful haiku!

[Art Sun]

The serenity of wildlife is captivating...you place us within your thoughts and Nature, one can trulyfeel the essence of those wolves within their domain...nice work...