A Cat Tale

A simple but fun poem, I hope.

 

What's going on with that cat?
Why is it doing that?
How is it spinning in the air?
What keeps it hanging there?
It's going around and around
It's not even making any sound
I can't understand what it is I see
I can't say just because I see I believe
Won't someone help that cat escape
I'm afraid it's not going to have a positive fate
I stand and watch this bizarre show
I think this cat might just be a shadow

Reviews

[PyroKitty24]

haha very good~it was a fun read. I sat there and stared at that cat for who knows how long

[Ladysue]

this was great!!! fun and that ending could be taken a couple of ways...excellent!!!!

[Jim Parson]

Okay, inquiring minds want to know...does the picture inspire the poem or do you find the picture to compliment the poem? Very fun!

[No use.]

very interesting take ~ amusing and inquisitive combo

[Chris38]

This was weird and fun. Loved it.

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! I love this one. Did you fall into the wine bottle Tina?

[Black Cat Fever]

Wow! Very cute and clever. I sure hope that's not me hanging there spinning helplessly in the wind!

[Star Wolf]

Ah, this whole poem is cute!!! Love it!

[Eric Cox]

Fun! And so cute. What a mysterious thing, a floating spinning cat. Great job on this! Cool picture too.

[Robin]

if i leave this page does that cat still spin ... on another dimension ? only the shadow knows ... fun poem