Bubbles Or Fish?

Bubbles Or Fish?

A Poem by Tina Kline
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A simple fun poem, I hope.

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Bouncing and rippling

Joyful in their motion

Laughing and giggling

Like fish darting in the ocean

Hypnotic - Many eyes follow

Are they fish or just bubbles

Bouncing and rippling

Rising up to the waters surface

Optical illusion in constant motion

 


© 2011 Tina Kline


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Very cool. Fun too. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun indeed. Enjoyed this. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A fun and playful poem. I'm thinking its fish making bubbles. This is great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whats is up with the illusion??

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha, cute! I love this. Poem and picture go perfectly together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a bubbly work that got my attention and held it..I am glad that I chose it to read this morn..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits this morn..Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think they're bubbles. A nice littel poem and quite a contrast to the other stuff of yours I have read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a fun poem. It made me smile. I say they're bubbles and fish, what ever the viewer wishes to see in this. I love this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so cute! I can see the bubbles and the fish moving in a constant motion. Fun poem. Love the image too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I guess this could be one of those in the eye of the beholder deals... or depending on your state of mind... or simply a psychological test... a fun and creative little poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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