Her Victim

Her Victim

A Poem by Tina Kline


She tasted the blood, heavenly

Licking the sweetness from her finger, yum

She looked down at him, suffering

He just looked like food to her

She was still hungry, very hungry

And he was still so very alive

She grinned, exposing her fangs

He would be her feast, she’d finish her meal

He begged, he pleaded, it was all noise to her

She swooped down and pulled him close

Sinking her fangs in the holes she’d already made

She drank his blood, all she could

She had no mercy for her food

He died and she tossed him away, trash

At least she was satisfied now, she smiled

Then she walked away, trailing behind her, her laugh

 


© 2011 Tina Kline


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very cool piece a cold hearted vampire just the way they should be ... I liked this alot nice job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hell of a bloody write! He was her main course that satisfied her thirst for food. Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Intense and awesome! A brutal vampire. She's not all warm and cuddly like some.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

One cold hearted vampire, but if they are undead than that's how they ought to be. I hope she doesn't like cat blood! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 19, 2010
Last Updated on July 30, 2011
Tags: vampire, vampires, immortal, undead

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