An Expression Of Pain

Tears across the valley
Grey clouds hanging low
I hear the tortured weeping
I watch its painful show

The city is so wet today
I feel the chill deep within
I wonder who is crying
I wonder if it will ever end

I walk  the wet grey sidewalks
Feeling lonely and extremely cold
The rain just keeps falling
And the world just seems so old

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Dark and painful. Nice pen upon this piece.

[Black Cat Fever]

This outstanding poem sure does express pain, in more ways than one. Love it. Very powerful and very vivid.

[quill of shadows]

i like this one its verry simple but still verry well writen it flows pretty well and rime skeem is good too well done ,QoS

[Star Wolf]

Impressive and so very awesome! It expresses coldness and pain in a very vivid manner. Love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

So much need and pain in our world. Each of us must change how we think. A fine line between the poor and the rich. We need kind heart and good people willing to assist their family and friend to get over these bad times. I read the old Poet's. In their times the USA and world survived. I like this poem. Many of us are feeling and seeing the pain and need of the world.
Coyote

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece and filled with lots of thought... like the imagery in this ... you gave a cool mood of the city mixed with emotions... impressive job on this...