Autumn Approaching

Autumn Approaching

A Poem by Tina Kline


Fiery leaves suddenly appear
autumn is approaching
it's so clear

Geese passing in the chilly blue sky
I feel autumn coming
I hear it in their cry

The sun is shining with cold
Autumn will soon arrive
another year grows old

© 2010 Tina Kline


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I love autumn, this is a nice poem about that time of the year. Nice pen upon this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful. It describes the way seasons change from summer to fall perfectly.

-forever mine

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great piece, I believe it would go great along with my poem October.
the rhyme scheme is good, the image is great as well.
well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The last stanza was a perfect descriptive :) I truly thought the rhyme factor could be removed. Rhyme doesn't matter at all. This poem is too good to rhyme. You might re-consider :) Keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the last stanza much, the last true lines is truth expressed in poetic way, the whole poem is so nice to need, so fresh and lovely..

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. I can feel autumn after reading this. It's very refreshing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome! This really has an autumn feel to it! Love it! It's so beautiful it makes me glad fall is almost here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Autumn is my favorite time of year.
Fiery leaves and all!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Autumn is such a vivid wanderer, passing hot summer into chilled, color draped forests.. Here you speak that magic alive for us, and make us feel the season speak. Beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes the fall is coming. The birds are the first sign of the end of summer. The birds flying south to escape the cold. A very good poem. A reminder cold days will be here soon. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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