The Art Of Suicide

When the internal pain blossoms

The hurt and despair

When Death - The Beautiful Lover

Has Her cold fingers tenderly in your hair

Her cold breath fans your face

Eager for Her kiss

Eager for Her embrace

Then you know it’s true

To take your passion all the way

Ecstasy - Rapture - The Deadness goes away

 

In a warm bath

With the candles low

A little Chablis and Chardonnay

The briquettes softly glow

Enrique Iglesias’ “Escape” softly sighs

Carbon monoxide - Vanilla perfume drifting

No razors - No pills - Only a romantic way to die

Take Suicide - Take Her love - Desire - Kissing

There is no drama

No violence - No pain

No attention getting phone calls

Unless - When I die - Help is in vain

Photo of loved ones on a shelf

A flower - A drawing - A love poem

Of a longing - Ending a lifetime of being alone

Death seeps into the small enclosed room

Soothing Death - Toxins drifting everywhere

With a relaxing sigh

I am so very glad to die

 

The water is cold

Enrique sings no more

The candles are stubs

They found duct tape along the door

The wine is gone

The goblet is dry

After years of asking for help

Can anyone rightly ask, “Why?”

 

Reviews

[Love-shadowed Silhouett..]

I really liked it, the first paragraph was very captivating and it really made me want to keep reading. I was not at all dissapointed with my decision! It was a really great read, just absolutely excellent, I can't find the words to describe how much emotion I felt reading this!

[Star Wolf]

This is very dramatic in a dark way, rather seductive in a deathly way and very beautiful in a tragic way. I must say, its the damn best suicide poem I've ever read! Awesome and impressive all the way.

[Crusaderscross]

Very powerful and sad poem. Dispare is found everywhere here, the sense of drowning, the inability of the subject to see outside his or here mind. You actually do a wonderful job of painting the perfect picture of help needed. Really loved it.

Thanks a lot for the reviews. Appreciate a lot

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

wow, truly did love this, so captivating and much much much different from other suicide poems, it was quite pretty and soothing but over whelming and heart aching, the flow the words also amazing

[Eric Cox]

Glad you didn't do this, you're too special to me.
A very well penned, creatively done poem.