This was amazing. I absolutely love trees and to read a poem about them is just astounding. I, too, have written about a tree. It was about how their destiny is coming to fall but I don't want them to. :) Great write. It was astounding!
This is a nice comforting nature poem. Under more favorable weather conditions it would have inspired me to go for a walk.
I particularly liked the line "hear the soft soothing rustle / as if they brush against the blue sky." This is an unusual break for me, since I tend to appreciate metaphors more than similes. A potential stronger phrasing would be to eliminate the word "if" from the last line of the first stanza.
There's nothing else like a cool, green forest, and you obviously spend time there or you wouldn't describe it so well. Makes me want to be in one right now.
When Venus gets too close catfish have been known to come up out of the water onto the shore, feed awhile, then go back in.
It's business as usual in the Apocalypse. And business is very good right.. more..