Her Cold Shadow

There is a shadow that comes close to me.
I don't understand
but I feel I can
if I just try.
Her skin is so white.
Her eyes are so red
lit from behind
and she is so hungry.
I can see this in her smile
as she comes close to me
and I want to flee.
But I can't.
I want what she offers
I want it now.
I take what she gives.
Lust. Passion. Blood.
Her coldness was her love.
I took it all
and I did not care
for when dawn came
when she went away
I knew with night fall
I would rise and walk by her side.

Reviews

[R E Tree]

This is such a beautiful and breath-taking poem. My favourite was the ending it really did sound so touching and heart felt. I wouldn't say it wasn't too deep which is good otherwise it would have ruined it. It also shows how you desire so much love off someone and return it. I think this poem was made to be special and is written from the heart

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Seduced by the dark side... always a mysterious force that is undeniable... your words speak quite wonderfully of this power.

[Black Cat Fever]

She sounds very fascinating, like a Siren, who can resist her? This is darkly romantic and it rather pulls the reader in. Nicely done.