Her Cold Shadow

There is a shadow that comes close to me.
I don't understand
but I feel I can
if I just try.
Her skin is so white.
Her eyes are so red
lit from behind
and she is so hungry.
I can see this in her smile
as she comes close to me
and I want to flee.
But I can't.
I want what she offers
I want it now.
I take what she gives.
Lust. Passion. Blood.
Her coldness was her love.
I took it all
and I did not care
for when dawn came
when she went away
I knew with night fall
I would rise and walk by her side.

Reviews

[R E Tree]

This is such a beautiful and breath-taking poem. My favourite was the ending it really did sound so touching and heart felt. I wouldn't say it wasn't too deep which is good otherwise it would have ruined it. It also shows how you desire so much love off someone and return it. I think this poem was made to be special and is written from the heart

[Eric Cox]

Very cool. Love the dark romantic feel to this and the rise of you as a vampire. Very cool pen on this vampire poem.

[Dream Weaver]

I love vampires and lycans and anything there after. This is
a beautiful write on the darkside. I enjoyed it very much.

[R J Askew]

I want I take ... her coldness was her love. You capture the essence of vampiric otherness methinks.

[Marlena]

A happy ending for him I suppose xD Good work :)

[Star Wolf]

A very beautiful and romantic vampire tale. The guy doesn't lose faith with the vampire woman and all his dreams will come true.

[Sean M. Addams]

i like the blend of romance and darkness thought you did well with this overall a very cool vampire piece..nice job!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ohhh, love this .. I am , as many are, fascinated with the Vampyre lore .. this is a good vamp poem.. Seductive and passionate .. throwing all away just to feed this urge.. nice images.. see her clearly.

Chloe

[Iota]

The lovely vampire who comes and gives us eternal life on earth. Who would resist? Who would want too? Nice write.