Deer

A haiku

coming through the woods

a white tail deer pauses

I watch her in awe

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

You, Tina, made all your readers pause in awe.
Enjoyed the image!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

I can just picture the deer. Cool!

[Eric Cox]

Cool haiku. Deer are beautiful creatures. Cool pen on this haiku.

[A.Lee]

This is nice. I think you may need one more syllable in the second line though. Or I may have miscounted. I love watching deer. Nice image.

[Star Wolf]

Pretty as a picture!

[Black Cat Fever]

This reads like a snap shot yet I can feel the cold too!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I must stop and sigh... the call of the wild is always breathtaking.

I always see deer near my country home. Michigan is full of white tails, and they've become accustomed to humans being around.
Just yesterday I saw a little fawn in my driveway, looked happy as can be... They're cute.

[Jenny Nelson]

They are beautiful aren't they? I can picture the animal on a cold winter morning. Well done haiku.

[Wicahpi]

maybe next time you see her she'll have a fawn :)
I love to watch the deer. Reminds me of going
deer-spotting with dad many moons ago.
Thank you for sharing a visual experience.