Shadows In The Night

A vampire's love song for a lover.

Shadows in the night.

Voices calling

echoing in the dark places.

Voices calling me to you.

Voices calling you to me.

Crying out our lonely misery.

Echoing for eternity.

 

Shadows in the night.

Voices calling

seeking out the darker places.

Me seeking you.

You seeking me.

Seeking to end our lonely misery.

Seeking for eternity.

 

Shadows in the night.

Voices calling

here in the moonsplashed light.

Exposing the darker places.

Exposing me to you.

Exposing you to me.

Finally ending our lonely misery.

Ending it for all eternity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

Hello there. I really like this poem. It has a nice pace to it. I also love how it incorporates the title in so many lines like an echo. You have some serious talent. You deserve more appeal 'cause you're pretty good! I look forward to more from you.

I would also like to point out that I love the tone of this piece. Fantastic write!


-Ian Arbogast 2009 Age 15

[Eric Cox]

What a beautiful poem. Very moving. You did a superb job of your own theme. Much better than "Quentin's Theme" in the old tv show Dark Shadows.