I Believe

Christmas poem.

On one cold dark Christmas Eve
Sights came to me you couldn't believe
White deer dripping with frost
Antlers like glass, looking so lost
Snowflakes falling sounded like wind chimes
I felt like I was somewhere out of time
A more surreal wonderland there can't be
Small crystal birds flutter, such a sight to see
The falling snow creates a silver white landscape
Being here, what a better fate
But the most wonderful thing of all
Jesus Christ, He came to call
Dressed in His robes of pristine white
His belief lit up the shadowy night
Face radiant, brown eyes full of love
All around Him shimmered Holy snow like doves
I dropped to my knees to worship Him
Forgiven now are all my sins
I walked with Jesus in this Holy Land
I tried very hard but can only barely understand
The sky here is a frosty silver blue
Cold winds that never hurt blew
The animals are all kissed with Holy Magic
Compassion and love reign here so fantastic
On this cold dark Christmas Eve
I rose on high to proclaim, "I believe! Yes, I believe!"






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Reviews

[Star Wolf]

I love this! So awesome! It has outstanding imagery and if full of faith, inspiration and belief. Love the surreal world you placed this all in. Fanatic job!!!!

[Tom]

A strong faith based poem, expressively penned with conviction !

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very enchanting poem. It is spellbinding and inspiring.

[Coyote Song]

Such an awe inspiring write, at least I think so. Vivid breathtaking imagery, enchanting and spellbinding poem. I'm impressed by this.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A truly extraordinary poem. The beauty of love and faith that believing in Jesus Christ brings. Faith is powerful and faith is everything. A very well drafted poem.