Love Shines Through

love shines through

the golden blue glass ball

casting reflections

of mystery and suspense

seagulls cry

ocean waves roar

the sands are pink

the sands are blue

we walk there together

just me and you

love shines through

this special glass ball

casting rainbows and auroras

spelling our names

together

forever

yes, I do love you

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very beautiful and splendid.
I love this romantic tale.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you thank you.

[Craig2591]

Simple and elegant. . . . . .

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very very romantic. I love the feel and images from this poem. Your words are very heartfelt and graceful. Wonderful poem!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Song]

Wow! Love this one. Very beautiful visually and deeply romantic!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Susie Q]

The glass ball casting reflections of mystery & suspense. This is how true love feels sometimes. It will shine through no matter what. Nice write!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so very much!

[Star Wolf]

Love this! Very romantic, with outstanding imagery laying the foundation to the poem.
A little real, a little surreal. Awesome through and though.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this...it is so romantic and then at the end the hint of reluctantly admitting...

it is shown in every way...but when it comes to the actual words, not always easy....but love shines through the actions, doesn't it?

[Tina Kline]

Yes it does. Thanks very much.