Rainy Afternoons

Rain -
endless droplets
falling from a grey overcast sky
I stand
at my window
rain splattering on the glass
seeing
dreaming
my dreams
knowing
that someday
I will make them come true

Rain -
endlessly falling
I am captivated
by the endless possibilities

rainy afternoons
magic happens

Reviews

[Moon]

I like the picture you paint of this glorious rainy afternoon. In fact I liked the idea so much, I thought I'd have a play about with it. Hope you don't mind, I was thinking something like this...

Rain -

endless droplets
falling from a grey overcast sky

Rain

I stand
at my window
pitter patter on the glass

Rain

seeing
dreams,
my dreams,
knowing someday
I will make them come true

Rain -

endlessly falling
I am captivated
by the endless possibilities

Rain

in the afternoon,
magic happens

[Tina Kline]

Thanks and good write based on my write.

[Susie Q]

Very nice write, Tina. I think sometimes when the rain falls maybe it will wash away the cares of the world & a new beginning will come. I guess I am quite a dreamer hoping magic does happen.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Black Cat Fever]

Nice poem. Well done.
this describes the kins of afternoons I enjoy a lot.

[Tina Kline]

thnks!!!!!!

[Craig2591]

This poem makes a rainy day enjoyable. I LOVE the graphic!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!!

[Coyote Song]

I like this. It's raining here right now and gazing out the window and dreaming positive thoughts of the future is a good way to spend some time. I enjoyed this very well done poem.

[Tina Kline]

thanks!!!!!