11:35PM

A frog lune haiku 3/5/3 word count.

countless frogs singing
I listen throughout the night
snug in bed

Author's Note

The lune - The English Language Haiku
2 kinds: 3/5/3 word count
5/3/5 syllables

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoyed this, and I enjoyed the info about the lune, which I didn`t know, and will look at with interest, I only know the traditional form of the haiku ( 5-7-5 syllables ), the Tanka ( with two extra lines with 7-7 syllables ) and the Senryü, which is a haiku which concentrates more on emotions than nature, but you know all this, so I will simply enjoy your poem, which I like a lot, I think it is not easy to compress meaning into three lines,you did very well here

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very nice haiku. I like the vision in invokes, sound too.

[DogDrawler]

Pawsome lines! I see your vision.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very very nice work Tina. I love frogs.

[Coyote Song]

A very peaceful and relaxing poem. I so love to hear the frogs singing away at night. They must be tree frogs. So tiny and cute with interesting markings on them. A wonderful poem, truly delightful and I so enjoyed reading this!

[Tina Kline]

Thnaks!

[Star Wolf]

i like. It captures in a few short words how cool it is just being able to relax and listen to the wonderful sounds of nature...here being frogs. Awesome poem!

[KAREN]

Great imagery! Painted a nice picture!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Eric Cox]

Cool poem. A beautiful thing to hear frogs singing, especially when snug in bed. Nicely done!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)