Stars Of Silver Fire

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

stars burning high
spinning balls of silver fire
exploding into reality

Author's Note

The lune - The English Language Haiku
2 kinds: 3/5/3 word count
5/3/5 syllables

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

I read this and a meteor came to mind, they've been in the news a lot lately. A very vivid and powerful poem here....I see it as an explosion of beauty way up in outerspace
somewhere and we on Earth have the awe and fear of seeing it way down below. I love this poem!

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Love the imagery. Excellent work.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Eric Cox]

woof welcome!

[Tina Kline]

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

very nicely done, these short pieces of yours...

enjoy the visuals..

i like the frog one...they sit on their cold lily pad beds...and sing to us, while we snuggle under the covers.

cozy!

[Tina Kline]

Thank you much!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Wonderful! It's like a new star or planet has been born into the universe! Astonishingly beautiful!

[Holly Mason]

simply stated explosive beauty
thank you for sharing

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[DogDrawler]

Great work! I love your vision of a supernova.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

fine job - it`s not easy to write good haikus, and Tina can

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[larryb]

Very Nice Haiku...well done Tina

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.

[Black Cat Fever]

This creates a very beautiful vision....a strong one. Good job!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks BCF!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, this is just soooooooooo pretty and creates a lovely image in the mind!!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!