Spring's Return

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

spring flowers unfurl
the soil warm and moist
the air perfumed

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Mmm I can sense the sweet lavender already... fields of hope...
Let springtime come soon, another good one!

- Elisa

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

You're most welcome, I shall come back soon for more....

[Jack Reaper]

perfect for the coming spring.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks for all the reviews!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome poem! Very creative and beautiful!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Breathtaking! I'm waiting for this day to happen!

[Coyote Song]

This is like a breath of fresh air after the long cold frozen world of winter! I love it!

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful picture of spring you've captured.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahhh yes I can smell what spring time is cooking. Excellent haiku except I only count 3-6-4

[Black Cat Fever]

It's a lune haiku, it explains that at the top under the authors name.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh

[EverleafOwl]

Simple, clever, and beautiful! Great work! (now i want Spring!)

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[EverleafOwl]

Very welcome, good poet!