Winter Mystery

Winter Mystery

A Poem by Tina Kline

Some fluttering objects
drifting like gossamer
in the cold winter air

Wispy mists
coiling about
beneath the street lights
Snowflakes?

A small mystery
as more white fluff
moves about
like so many
winter butterflies
drifting
seemingly
without destination

but the mystery
lingers
as night after night
these fluttery objects
appear

One can only conclude
they are not objects
but living creatures
of mysterious
unknown origins


© 2013 Tina Kline


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This is beautiful. The imagery in this piece is very strong and your description seem almost magical. (I know that sounds corny, sorry. But, really, it's wonderful).
The only thing I thing you could change is you say 'objects' quite a bit. You've used such a great vocabulary and the word objects in itself is the most attractive. I know how hard it is to find so many synonyms for a single word but I think it will make a huge difference in the flow of your poem if you change even only one of the 'objects'.
Anyway, really well done. I loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
SheActsLikeSummer

12 Years Ago

No problem. It was beautiful :)



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Wow, I like this. There is a deep mystery here. Perhaps the snowflakes seem like
they are alive the way they twirl and drift in the wind or breezes as the fall to the ground. Lovely imagery in this poem. I love the whole snowy scene!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the reviews!!
Photo and poem was amazing. We had a little snow today. It is beautiful to watch when there is nothing to do. I like your description. I came back home to Michigan for the four seasons. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much!

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