Winter
A Poem by
Tina Kline
Autumn leaves falling Deep into yesterday In the cold sky overhead Heaving shifting shades of grey Nowhere is safe Winter cold seeping in Hungry birds twitter Gusting are the winds Bare limbs rattling Clawing at the icy sky Geese have long since left Still echoing are their cries Frozen raindrops glitter Coating the bare winter limbs The ground frozen stone hard Winter has cycled around again
© 2013 Tina Kline
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You write of the seasons such as this winter cold with such finesse! I can just see the frozen raindrops glittering on the bare winter limbs!! This has powerful imagery.
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much!
Winter can be beautiful, but it has its dark side, too, and you described it wonderfully here.
I also prefer 'grey' over 'gray'. I think it is more powerful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Winter can be beautiful, but it has its dark side, too, and you described it wonderfully here.
I also prefer 'grey' over 'gray'. I think it is more powerful.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you and I agree with you on the difference between gray and grey.
Winter and her cold cold grasp . sleep, perchance to dream, for spring awaits
Posted 11 Years Ago
Winter and her cold cold grasp . sleep, perchance to dream, for spring awaits
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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