Autumn Breeze

Swaying in the autumn breeze
Little silver raindrops fall
Red leaves paint the sidewalk
Overhead wild geese call

Dark heavy clouds hug the skyline
Creating darkness earlier in the day
Yellow leaves flutter in the air
Naked branches rattle and sway

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

Love the images and descriptions in your poem. Your poem has the sound and motion of autumn and I can just almost smell the wonderful scent of fallen leaves. I get a sense of enchantment from your poem as well as a musical quality. I can't explain that, I just get that sense. I enjoyed your poem very much.

[Eric Cox]

Cool imagery. A cool poem painting Autumn. Very nice pen upon this.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you Eric!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome. :)

[Tina Kline]

woof

[Black Cat Fever]

A really well written autumn poem. Excellent autumn scene and feel to it.

[Relic]

Very well written with nice imagery.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Relic]

:)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

An enchanting image you've painted here with your words. I enjoyed traveling to this autumn landscape with you.

[Star Wolf]

Love the autumn imagery in this, a very delicate and lovely poem!