A Better Place

Written for THE CREATIVE WRITING group.

soft green leaves
leftover from spring
warm breezes
gentle sighs
something's on the radar
time to fabricate
memories drifting
taken up by solar breezes
journeys to forge
summer wears on
heat rises
absorbing moisture
desert like dreams
a wet aphrodisiac
doesn't mean much
nothing delectable
but soft green leaves
rustling in the spring
robins warble
sunshine
a better place, yes
to be spending time

Author's Note

Written for the CREATIVE POETRY group.
Words used are underlined.

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

A place anyone would love to spend time. Lush, green and peaceful, over all grandly beautiful!

[KAREN]

Love the beautiful imagery, and the place this poem takes me to.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Awesome imagery of summer! Excellentlly written!

[Black Cat Fever]

Interesting poem. Very good poem. Love the imagery. Good work here!

[Coyote Song]

Very good use of words. This reads like a stream of consciousness. The free flow of thoughts. I like the little connects that link one thought stream to another.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very unique poem, rather dreamy but very enjoyable.