One Love

Another very short story about the love of one man's life...

Sam stared into the eyes he had adored his whole life, locked in a whirl of a romantic love tussle.
"I love you," he said softly.
"I love you too," came the reply.
"Kiss me!"
Their lips brushed tenderly in one single kiss.
"I love you," Sam said again. His deep voice barely above a whisper. He smiled. "You'll never be left on the shelf, you're far too wonderful, do you know that?"
Another smile, a wink and one last kiss.
"I have to go," Sam said, staring into those incredible brown eyes again. "I can't wait until the next time we meet. I love you so much!"
Sam hated to say goodbye; it broke his heart to leave the love of his life but his reflection would just have to wait until he came back from the toilet.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

hahahaha.... oh my goodness... that's very very sweetly done... i think the best thing that you are capable of doing in your writing is keeping the intensity of the story high till the last moment... i was wondering about who is replying back to Sam and thought about reading the ending first but then decided not to see it otherwise it will destroy the enjoyment of the story.... my hat goes off to you.... this is just brilliant to put a smile on anyone's face.... full ratings... add me as the first fan of yours...

[Tina H.W.]

Wow...! Little bit speechless! Thank you so much! I didn't think such a review would come from a little story I thought of and wrote within the space of ten minutes. But, err...thank you again! :D

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! you are welcome mate... you made a great start.... keep doing what you love doing...

[Shannon]

Very clever! I would leave it at that but comments have to be 25 characters!

[Tina H.W.]

Haha thank you! It's a bit daft and a little silly but it came to my head in a "Eureka!" moment. And when that happens, I have to go with it... Thank you ;)

[Shannon]

When it comes to writing, always just "go with it"!

[Tina H.W.]

Ride those prose waves... ;)

[Shannon]

How very witty you are!

[busterlee]

That was cute. Just think you could have went on for pages before that last line. I thought someone was dying.

[Tina H.W.]

;) Thank you! Haha maybe pages and pages more of it and you may have felt like the dying person! :D
It's nice that you appreciated it :)