One Love

Another very short story about the love of one man's life...

Sam stared into the eyes he had adored his whole life, locked in a whirl of a romantic love tussle.
"I love you," he said softly.
"I love you too," came the reply.
"Kiss me!"
Their lips brushed tenderly in one single kiss.
"I love you," Sam said again. His deep voice barely above a whisper. He smiled. "You'll never be left on the shelf, you're far too wonderful, do you know that?"
Another smile, a wink and one last kiss.
"I have to go," Sam said, staring into those incredible brown eyes again. "I can't wait until the next time we meet. I love you so much!"
Sam hated to say goodbye; it broke his heart to leave the love of his life but his reflection would just have to wait until he came back from the toilet.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

hahahaha.... oh my goodness... that's very very sweetly done... i think the best thing that you are capable of doing in your writing is keeping the intensity of the story high till the last moment... i was wondering about who is replying back to Sam and thought about reading the ending first but then decided not to see it otherwise it will destroy the enjoyment of the story.... my hat goes off to you.... this is just brilliant to put a smile on anyone's face.... full ratings... add me as the first fan of yours...

[Tina H.W.]

Wow...! Little bit speechless! Thank you so much! I didn't think such a review would come from a little story I thought of and wrote within the space of ten minutes. But, err...thank you again! :D

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! you are welcome mate... you made a great start.... keep doing what you love doing...

[Manasa.L]

ha ha ha the last line made me burst into laugh. Wonderful.

[Tina H.W.]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, Manasa. Thank you for stopping by :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The last line completely took me off guard and I burst out laughing! Hilarious for sure! Loved it 😊👍

[Tina H.W.]

If I can make someone laugh, even for a few seconds, then I'm pleased. So glad you enjoyed it, YumnaKay . Thank you! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Same here ;)
you're welcome, Tina. It was a pleasure indeed reading this. I'll be sure to check more of yours for a good laugh ;) I need those a lot :P

[Tina H.W.]

Aw, thank you so much for stopping by. I really do appreciate it ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I, your writings ;) :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I, your writings ;) :)

[matrixmark]

Oh my Tina, you crafty woman. I have to say that this one borught a smile to my face and YES it caught me out AGAIN.
A snappy, but yet another COOL piece. I really do like how you leave the TA DAH! moment until the last possible seconds.

QUALITY WORK AGAIN.

Got a big grin from me.

Mark.

[Tina H.W.]

Haha thank you, Mark. I literally wrote that in less than five minutes, while trying to overcome writers block! I'm glad it made you smile :)

Tina

[matrixmark]

5 minutes, I am impressed. When I look back on it,I though to myself that the hardest line to do would have been the first. But then you go and say 'it only took 5 minutes' - SHOW OFF!!! ;-)

Mark.

[R J Askew]

I think Poster Girl is still bossing my mind. Tis the stronger of the two.

[Peyton Light]

Flipping hilarious XD Loved it :)

[Tina H.W.]

Well...thank you!! :)

[freaksheet]

Your stories are funny, cuz! You rock!

[Tina H.W.]

Haha thank you! Glad you liked it, cuz ;)

[Adesanya Yewande]

amazing tina,i was eager to know who sam was talking to,its such a lovely piece

[Tina H.W.]

Hey, thank you! :) Ahh.. It was thought about and written in a moment. It's a little silly, but I'm pleased you liked it :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

it wasn't silly it really is a nice piece

[Tina H.W.]

What started out as just a "silly, daft" story has turned into something I can look back on and say "ha, it actually made some people smile!" And now I'm quite proud of it :)

[Inject Positivity]

you should be proud of it dear frnd... this is an amzing piece of writing which makes the reader feel surprised as well as happy...

[Tina H.W.]

Thank you so much! :)

[hcarson]

haha..love this good idea :)

[Tina H.W.]

:D haha thank you. As I said earlier, a little silly but hey! :)

[hcarson]

not silly, its clever.. and true of sooo many people haha :)

[Tina H.W.]

Well...I Can't argue with that! ;)