Firmly Dancing in the Wind...

This poem resembles the reader in a way. You are strongly rooted in your beliefs and ideals which makes you stand strong against everything else. Though you are strong your mind and body can flourish.

Alone, standing in a void field,
my leaves flowing in the wind.
The grass around me is breathing,
all moving as one.
The wind rushes at me,
trying to move me,
but I remain planted,
rooted in my soil.
As I blissfully brace the wind,
my branches dance in the breeze.
Forever I will stand strong,
but my branches will bend,
taking me to new lands.

Reviews

[Latifa]

beautiful,I like it a lot specially
my branches dance in the breeze.
Forever I will stand strong,
but my branches will bend,
taking me to new lands.

[1Disawsum]

Loved this poem also, cleverly written, clever 'plot-line' if I may. Smart thinking of turning a poem into this, and it is true. We as writers do stand strong in our beliefs, but society and its way, to use as an example, do bring us to new thoughts and ideas. Smart write.

[Chris]

Welcome to WC Timothy.

I get the "tree" and the thought flow... and liked how you developed it until the last line. But the whole being that we are must be able to learn and "deal" or the branches will separate from the trunk come even a "light" storm.

[Alfred Kukitz]

How you breathe life into the landscape as it joins you in your position.

[Parimal Pratyush]

Vivid imagery at it's best. Amazing work. :D Loved it.

[Cory Barrett]

Very lovely piece here, well penned!

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely flowing spiritual thoughtful piece.

[A. Amos]

Intelligent piece of writing and enjoyable read!

[Matching Socks]

I liked this a lot!
Strength of one...