Belittled

You spit in my face

Like I'm a f*****g disgrace

To try to make me hate it

Then you expect me to run

When I'm the one with the gun

Dangerous and desperate

I want to see your face

When you decide to stay

Because you feel bigger

Oh sweet romance

When given the chance

I'm gonna pull the trigger

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Packed full of emotion. Short and to the point. Great write.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

It's depth is quite frightening sinister and yet it felt like a crooked smile could be placed here if words had faces, least in my understanding/interpretation of such a well written piece. I liked this. Most definitely. :)

[dreaming dame]

I would be afraid to be on the wrong end of that gun:P I liked this, was strong, easy to read, an well rhymed:)