Substance of a hug

Think about what a hug actually means, when you need it the most.

i need a hug,

not to circle my hands around someone,

i'd like a full embrace,

where our faces meet,

passionate kiss...

exchange of happiness 

exchange of misery,

exchange of bliss

words of empathy,

actions, ecstassy

i'd like to once again feel,

to cut lose this madness within,

i'd like to feel free...

the peace

 

i need a hug,

not to entangle our lips in that passionate bliss,

i'd like our hearts collide,

blood pumps through your arteries,

flows through my veins,

our bodies mingled,

what your hands touch,

my mind knows,

our lungs in unison,

you inhale,

i blow,

our bodies flow,

 

i need a hug,

not just the mingling of our bodies

and the exchange of passionate energies

i need our thoughts to float together

same state of meditation,

misty subconscious shapes,

smokey formless ideas,

the space between our minds,

no more yours, no more mine

to walk in space,

two substances connect,

a soul embrace...

Reviews

[MOON]

Love the soul embrace last line says it all. Beautiful verse.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Gorgeous TimTim- I love the idea of two being so close they share the same thoughts in a sense.. beautiful and romantic.

Chloe

[Holly O'Brien]

What if we could get exactly what we crave by just wishing on it? I know I attempt to do so all the time lol.....that's what this poem made me realize.

Usually most of our actions demonstrate what we want in return. I constantly saw that in this poem. Straight through, the protagonist speaks of a unison...a shared hug, not just a simple greeting. This poem shows how affection has it's own gravity...everyone is pulled into it when it is shared. I like this a lot♥

Good write!!

[Akshat♥]

really nice..i really liked..
hug can do anything..moves the person..
good job done!!!

[Ruth]

Oh wow! This is stunningly versed love! Truly so! A hug, put into words that are memorable and all consuming! Amazing flow too xx