Old Man Time

Old Man Time

A Poem by Ollie
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Entry for love poetry contest. Apologies for the morbid nature of it!

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Old Man Time

 

Remember our first kiss?

How the wind howled,

The windows rattled.

The old house groaning.

 

A lifetime ago.

That was then,

This is now.

The end of all things.

 

Old Man Time,

Our third wheel,

Come to destroy us.

The passionless executioner.

 

In this sterile room,

I watch your chest

Rise and fall.

Rise and fall.

 

One last kiss,

Your lips cold.

A squeeze of my hand

Tells me goodbye.

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Ollie


Author's Note

Ollie
My poems tend to be too prosaic, and I think this one is too. But practice makes perfect, as they say! I'm sure people will be able to suggest ways to pare it down, and that's be appreciated.

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