Untitled (Need Advice)

My screams pierce the empty hollows of my mind.
Like an endless echo that wont leave my sight.
I search all around, but there is nothing to find.
Just rage and anger that burns so bright.

Author's Note

This is something that I wrote today. (June 9, 2010) I feel like it is unfinished, and would like any and all advice on where I should take it. Or should I just wait till I feel inspired to write again? Or do you think that it is fine how it is? Please give me feed back!

Reviews

[Monica Carr Innovation]

Hey, hun. Have you re-visited this yet? If not, maybe you could add some more now-- maybe focus on what your anger or fear is..? I hope you're doing well and are still writing.

Lot's of love!

-Monica

[Tempest Skye]

I think when those emotions hit you again, then come back to this poem. It is a great start to something epic. You are a great writer and don't doubt your writing skills. Your heart will tell you when your finished with a certain poem.