Destination Haiku

 

all roads lead to you
even if i make a point
of walking backwards

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

what what!?!? i love that!! i glance at haikus when i get the chance, but usually never comment because I'm never really that impressed - this one i am definitely impressed with!! i think i'm adding it to my little ol' favorites library :P

the flow is perfect. it reads like a book in a haiku hehe

[Wulfstan Crumble]

Very witty senryu you have produced. It was flawless and charming. Its very hard to comment on such Japanese forms of poetry for their conciseness is a problem; especially as they are simple and in your case perfect. The wry humour makes for an enchanting senryu. Good work.