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By living diminished

she has made me peripheral,

a vanquished soldier on the hillside,

watching my home

being desecrated,

from afar.

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

this is quite wonderful. the flow was perfect, and i read it a couple times, trying to get different meanings out of it. i still didn't get much of a concrete 'meaning', but it didn't matter. it reads so smoothly, and... there's something about it quite nice :)