What if?

What if?

A Poem by TimBrul

What if?
What if this life is not as beautiful as we think?
Maybe we just had too much to drink,
What if love is just another word,
That someone has just heard.

F**k, what if even the grass wasn't as green.
The sky wasn't as blue?
What would even do?

Would we go crazy, out of our mind,
Would we lose our entire appetite?
Does it even matter,
Do we really care,
About this life, which we al share.

Yeah we do and no we don't.
This life is as wonderful as we think it is.
So yeah live, love, don't miss.
Because it's over before you know it.
 Make sure you don't blow it.

© 2016 TimBrul


Author's Note

TimBrul
Just a piece I wrote a while back, let me know what you think, probably a bit chaotic isn't it? :p

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I really like this piece! Good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


TimBrul

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the idea behind this and I would love if you went deeper into detail about what makes you even ask this question!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TimBrul

8 Years Ago

Thanks, I might, like I said it's just an old piece, it needs a lot of work.

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Added on January 11, 2016
Last Updated on January 11, 2016
Tags: life, live, love, miss, what, if, drink, word

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TimBrul
TimBrul

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A Poem by TimBrul