Remember

2 minutes of random thaughts makes this :)

Remember

 

Remember when I first saw you
Sitting there alone
You gazed my way and I felt it
Your warmth, that inner soul

 

And so I come to remember
The time in which we spend
So special and stuck within my heart
Within my mind and soul

 

That smile was so disarming
A riddle still unsolved
That look was so enchanting
A tale still to tell

 

And so I come to remember
The time in which we spend
So special and stuck within my heart
Within my mind and soul

 

Now tell me why
 was I so blind
Yet now I see so clearly
All seems much less dreary

 

And so I come to remember
The time in which we spend
So special and stuck within my heart
Within my mind and soul

 

For the time of fear and despair be gone
For hope and love has found a song
Remember when I first saw you
Sitting there alone…

Reviews

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... mesmerizing and poignant ...

[Legion]

I always love that moment. Nicely worded.

[The Raven King]

Very nice flow and pacing here

[ah]

I REALLY enjoyed reading this. Kudos!

[R J Askew]

'A riddle still unsolved' catches my eye as such a mystery means love is likely to carry on trying to solve it.

[Lilly]

Nice poem - well written. Lovely piece

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

A wonderful song that sticks in the mind like love sickness!