Falling

Interpret it however you need

And the rain came falling

Down,

Down upon my soddon face,

My face which held both sorrow and joy

 

The rain came falling,

Down,

Down to the sea

Washing away, to the waves which carry our wisdom

 

The rain came falling

Down,

Down to me

To say hello, before the goodbye

 

And the rain came falling,

Falling,

Falling to the bone dry ground

To wash away the mistreated

And the rain came falling.

 

Author's Note

**this was written back in 2011 when I was 14 years old**

After suffering with major clinical depression and psychosis after many years of battling my demons, I remembered how I expressed all the empathy and sympathy I could give but never received. I would love some feedback to inspire me to write again. Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Adam Whitworth]

Lots of poems have this vague nebulous feeling about them, and thats a good thing, leaving the reader to find an individual response. Yet at the same time poetry can be incredibly precise; I must confess to having a wobble of worry at the line " To wash away the mistreated " I thought perhaps that line could have a tweak.

[y&r]

Nice imagery. It is really amazing. :)

[...]

Very Good pararde of rain,
Love the imagery in this write.
You are very talented.

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Very nice!! And beautifully written. Absolutely loved it. :')

[iand63]

this is a repeat read not an instant 'this is what it is about' poem. hmmm well written and intriguing

[Pebbles]

just love this, well done :)

[ecept]

This is so good and so touching I love this.

[Millie]

This is actually amazing! I love the use of the words 'Down' and 'Falling'

It's amazing Well done!

:))

Millie.xXx

[Lauren_Jane_96]

THANKYOU :D xxxxxxxx

[Tyler and Lozza]

OMG!!!!!!! This is brilliant :D - Lozza ♥