The Hierophant

I can see you well.Beautifull cartel. Stay here, don't say farewell.
Keep like a bombshell. Drop it like its from hell.

Ba da bim bom Sound da bell. 
Turn around and yell : Hey I didn't come here to play. Santa come and take my troubles away.

You no say: Santa gets away. No way. Daddy got to stay. 
You see, candles don't lit themselves mary. We got those Elves. 
Listen to the beat of a death drop selves. Entrance examine on the book shelves. Come back around when you are twelve.

Red Rod hoodie . Come cowboy it will sooth ya. Will willy wonka wank with woody. Better leave them alone with a smoothy. Drip drop droopy. A lot of the dope is not for thee.

Mushrooms grow from the inside out just as your brain does. Don't put it in a hose. Pick the chocolate you choose. Tick tock. those. Belle has a rose. Picks up an empty dose. Vacume valencia valium veritas .Whatever you hold, I beg you not to let go.

Hold that lantern way up high. Losers in the sky. Sandals and riddles in the sand. Oh yes you can. Riddles in the sand. Blast and rant . Gargoyles in the sand. From what land, does gargoyles in the sand, .. where do they stand? Lend me your hand. Circles in the sand.

Door to castles in sky, tell me why, my kingdom falls from way up high? Come crashing down. The weight comes down. Bow low and return again. Message in the sand.

The poison that you grant. Don't be so bland. 
Humility way up high oh please come down,. Bless us from the sky. Aliens that land and live with us. Take a guide and tour bus trough brains unready and so fly. That's why, we return as candles in the night.

Don't put up a fight. We are candles in the night. Follow the light. Candles in the night. We are the fight. Candles at first sight. Love conquers might. Travel in the night. Close to the caravan. Villains strike so far. Assasins of the night. Flame and fight. Lament and so far no Kabar.

Reviews

[JoshuaCmngs]

Such a strange and convoluted arrangement of words, it is almost like some passage out of a horror movie. The poem itself is not a horror, and is very interesting, I only used a horror movie for a good metaphor. The poem is twisted and changing, ever flowing and further evolving, picking up momentum until it abruptly stops, leaving you wanting more, but also satisfied. Over all, 8/10

[DaVoid]

Thanks for your feedback. Very helpful.

[Hyacinth]

So complicated, yet so amazing.you truly have a way with words, DaVoid. I loved the last paragraph, and your use of metaphor and onomatopoeia. As always, it was fantastic. Keep it up.

[DaVoid]

thanks. really appreciate that you took the time to read.

[Hyacinth]

My pleasure.