Whispers

shrouding me with words and thoughts

Sweet whispers cloud my mind

Whisking through bends and curves

Electric shock size of pin needles

Tingling every one of my nerves

 

Word singing throughout my body

Vibrating with such grace

Silk velvet meeting brown skin

Words embrace me with diamond lace

 

Breath of truth lightly touch my breast

Sliding through all natural defenses

Touch of fire, kiss of water

Spirit clashing with my senses

Reviews

[serenitychill]

thats it!!! it didnt feel finished to me. Like idk whats missin but it felt like there was more to say... definitely a good start tho :)